2011-02-16, 16:45
#6553
2011-02-16, 16:56
#6554
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Ursprungligen postat av Pockel
Jag anser mig själv vara flytande i engelska, men jag märker dock att jag fortfarande ha lite att öva på, eller vad säger ni när ni läser dessa meningar i mitt cover letter.
Ge gärna förslag på förbättringar, tack!
As the former assistant of XXXXXX I learned to handle a wide variety of tasks and understand the importance of always providing high service level including taking own responsibility and initiatives to get things done. In the role I assisted XXXX in essential matters that varied from meetings with state officials, leading projects, writing press releases to travel planning.
Ge gärna förslag på förbättringar, tack!
As the former assistant of XXXXXX I learned to handle a wide variety of tasks and understand the importance of always providing high service level including taking own responsibility and initiatives to get things done. In the role I assisted XXXX in essential matters that varied from meetings with state officials, leading projects, writing press releases to travel planning.
As the former assistant of the XXXXXX, I was taught to handle a variety of tasks. I understand the importance of responsibility, to take initiative and providing a high level of service.
Furthermore, I assisted XXXXX in essential matters such as, meeting with state officials, managing different projects, handeling the press, as well as planning various business trips.
Något sådant hade nog jag skrivit
2011-02-16, 17:25
#6556
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Ursprungligen postat av troettsam
As the former assistant of the XXXXXX, I was taught to handle a variety of tasks. I understand the importance of responsibility, to take initiative and providing a high level of service.
Furthermore, I assisted XXXXX in essential matters such as, meeting with state officials, managing different projects, handeling the press, as well as planning various business trips.
Något sådant hade nog jag skrivit
Furthermore, I assisted XXXXX in essential matters such as, meeting with state officials, managing different projects, handeling the press, as well as planning various business trips.
Något sådant hade nog jag skrivit
Helt klart bäst hittills! Ta efter denna TS.
2011-02-16, 17:30
#6557
Citat:
Ursprungligen postat av troettsam
As the former assistant of the XXXXXX, I was taught to handle a variety of tasks. I understand the importance of responsibility, to take initiative and to provide a high level of service.
Furthermore, I assisted XXXXX in essential matters such as: meeting with state officials, managing different projects, handling the press, as well as planning various business trips.
Något sådant hade nog jag skrivit
Furthermore, I assisted XXXXX in essential matters such as: meeting with state officials, managing different projects, handling the press, as well as planning various business trips.
Något sådant hade nog jag skrivit
Sådär! Hittar inget mer fel.
Eller:
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Ursprungligen postat av troettsam
...to take initiative whilst providing a high level of service.
Beroende på vad man vill säga.
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Senast redigerad av 1Sic 2011-02-16 kl. 17:33.
Senast redigerad av 1Sic 2011-02-16 kl. 17:33.
2011-02-16, 17:30
#6558
Citat:
Ursprungligen postat av troettsam
As the former assistant of the XXXXXX, I was taught to handle a variety of tasks. I understand the importance of responsibility, to take initiative and providing a high level of service.
Furthermore, I assisted XXXXX in essential matters such as, meeting with state officials, managing different projects, handeling the press, as well as planning various business trips.
Något sådant hade nog jag skrivit
Furthermore, I assisted XXXXX in essential matters such as, meeting with state officials, managing different projects, handeling the press, as well as planning various business trips.
Något sådant hade nog jag skrivit
Språkligt mycket bättre, med 1sics små justeringar, så ser det riktigt bra ut.
2011-02-16, 17:44
#6560
2011-02-16, 17:57
#6561
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Senast redigerad av jolmy 2011-02-16 kl. 18:03.
Senast redigerad av jolmy 2011-02-16 kl. 18:03.
2011-02-16, 17:58
#6562
"to get things done" Såg att någon nämnde det förut men det är definitivt något som bör ändras.
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