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2012-09-09, 22:56
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Medlem
Lifestyle
Are you a monster because you don’t have the same lifestyle as your sister? Or the problem isn’t you but your sister?

The history of human beings is over 100 years but is there over 100 various types of lifestyle? Probably yes, because the lifestyle of an individual to another individual is different, even though they have the same blood.

Then the next question would be “how come that all the human don’t have the same lifestyle? More correctly, what reasons create different lifestyles? An 18-year-old girl doesn’t live as her mother, that’s for sure. Here is one reason, the age. This means that human in different ages do different stuffs, for example teenagers would rather go to party than staying at home on the contrary people in their 50’s prefer to travel around the world with their family instead of going to club.

Another matter is gender. Due to the fact that the average of women and men don’t have the same interests, they prioritize different things and therefor they have various lifestyles.

The third reason is acquaintance. “You’re known by the company you keep” is a translated quote originally from the Swedish quote “Man blir som man umgås”, it says that a person gets affected by the persons around her/him. As a result, he or she will in by any manners of means start to act like them. An example is that the crime rate among teenagers has risen constantly and many of these cases have pointed out peer pressure as the cause.

Living in a developing nation isn’t a bed of roses but they have a lifestyle as well, though it’s hardly similar to ours. Since there’s neither cell phones, computer, ipads, nor any of those technical stuffs, they have a very simple but tough life; getting up early in the morning for going several miles to get water, trying to find some food and so on. If they want to talk to someone from another village, they have to walk. But people in an industrialized nation can just send an email to other side of the world and it would only take less than 5 minutes. The life in an industrialized nation is addicted by the technical stuffs; even the 5-year-old-kids are holding an ipad. This means that people are quite busy with their technical “toys”. Years ago when the technological hasn’t developed that much yet, business people were forced to travel around the world because of meetings but nowadays they can solve it just with a simple click in Skype. Also the formerly teenagers had to meet up their friends if they wanted to know news, but in present they can just check each other’s Facebook. Today’s lifestyles often consist technical stuffs for example, contacts, photos and the list goes on. If the technical stuffs suddenly disappear, it will cause a big problem for people in industrialized nations. But the people in developing nations would barely get affected by it. Technical stuffs do have their advantages but also disadvantages.
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2012-09-10, 00:39
  #14
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Hoppas din lärare inte använder sig utav urkund, för då blir du flaggad när du postat allt här
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2012-09-10, 08:28
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Hoppas din lärare inte använder sig utav urkund, för då blir du flaggad när du postat allt här

Nej han använder sig inte utan urkund Men snälla hjälp mig läsa igenom den!
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2012-09-10, 22:04
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Då ska vi se. Jag är hemma och jag hoppas du hinner läsa innan det är dags för redovisning.
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Are you a monster because you don’t have the same lifestyle as your sister?

Det här låter väldigt roligt. Försök använd ett mindre direkt ord istället för "a monster", som "Weird", "odd", "unusual." Sen är det not bättre att ha "Share" (Dela) iställer för "have".

To think two siblings could share lifestyle!? Cor blimey, the mental images!

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The history of human beings is over 100 years but is there over 100 various types of lifestyle?
Is används när det handlar om en. Are använder man när det är flera. Här gäller Are. "Span" är nog bättre att säga istället för att "det är över hundra år". Ungefär såhär: The history of mankind spans over 100 years. Det vill säga "Sträcker sig över hundra år". Det, eller lägg till "Old" efter 100.
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how come that all the human don’t have the same lifestyle?

På svenska blir detta "hur kommer det sig att alla människan inte har samma livsstil?". "The human" är grammatikfelet här.
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More correctly, what reasons create different lifestyles?

Vilka anledningar skapar livsstiler?

Försökte du säga "rättare sagt" eller "Eller snarare"? Då kan du använda "Or rather,". Även "Reasons" låter konstigt eftersom det betyder Anledningar. Det är nog bättre att fråga om vad som orsakar "What causes".
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Probably yes, because the lifestyle of an individual to another individual is different, even though they have the same blood.

"Probarly yes" får dig att låta osäker. Bättre är det med "most likely yes."
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the lifestyle of an individual to another individual is different, even though they have the same blood.

Is he writing this as he is covered in his sisters blood?
No, he´s covered in brandy!
OR MARMALADE!

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This means that human in different ages do different stuffs, for example teenagers would rather go to party than staying at home on the contrary people in their 50’s prefer to travel around the world with their family instead of going to club.

Punkt och kommatecken kan användas här. Läs högt och känn när du börjar få slut på syre. "Stuff" är vanligtvis i plural olikt svenskans "sak." Säg bara Stuff.
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Due to the fact that the average of women and men don’t have the same interests, they prioritize different things and therefor they have various lifestyles.

Guv´na, incoming Captain Obvious!
´Ey, the Cog´ney grammar´s strong with this ´un!

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“You’re known by the company you keep” is a translated quote originally from the Swedish quote “Man blir som man umgås”, it says that a person gets affected by the persons around her/him. As a result, he or she will in by any manners of means start to act like them.

Ett vanligt engelskt talesätt är annars "The Enviroment makes our character"; Det är omgivningen som gör oss till de vi är.
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Senast redigerad av Pontr 2012-09-10 kl. 22:12.
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2012-09-10, 22:07
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“You’re known by the company you keep” is a translated quote originally from the Swedish quote “Man blir som man umgås”, it says that a person gets affected by the persons around her/him. As a result, he or she will in by any manners of means start to act like them.

Ett vanligt engelskt talesätt är annars "The Enviroment makes our character"; Det är omgivningen som gör oss till de vi är.

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Living in a developing nation isn’t a bed of roses but they have a lifestyle as well, though it’s hardly similar to ours.

We sleep with roses?
We don´t. I do!

Go get some pudding and I´ll tell you all about it!
You better not be talkin´bout them Pokemon evolving.


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Since there’s neither cell phones, computer, ipads, nor any of those technical stuffs

Stuff ska det vara igen. Sen så är det lite konstigt att allt tidigare nämnt i listan inte är inkluderat i "Technical Stuff."

Roses are red. Violets are blue. Ipads are par´ of nature, ´cordin to you.
I´ve seen what Harrys ROSEmary is capable off!
Can I have more puddin, Guv´na?
Citera
2012-09-10, 22:08
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Medlem
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getting up early in the morning for going several miles to get water

"To go" passar bättre.

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This means that people are quite busy with their technical “toys”

... And that´s how i saw Rosemary play with herself.

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industrialized nation is addicted by the technical stuffs;

Än en gång, det är "Stuff"
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forced to travel around the world because of meetings but nowadays they can solve it just with a simple click in Skype.

This supports my hypothesis that the world is a Point ´n Click Adventure! Can you believe it, we´re reading a guys essay and having Edutainment!
Det clickade när jag och RosMari såg varandra i ögonen.
Are you Berks even listening? When´d you learn swedish?

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Technical stuffs do have their advantages but also disadvantages.

För sista gången, "Stuff" Inte "stuffs!"

´Ey we a´ finally don with this!
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Senast redigerad av Pontr 2012-09-10 kl. 22:15.
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2012-09-10, 23:38
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"To go" passar bättre.



... And that´s how i saw Rosemary play with herself.



Än en gång, det är "Stuff"


This supports my hypothesis that the world is a Point ´n Click Adventure! Can you believe it, we´re reading a guys essay and having Edutainment!
Det clickade när jag och RosMari såg varandra i ögonen.
Are you Berks even listening? When´d you learn swedish?



För sista gången, "Stuff" Inte "stuffs!"

´Ey we a´ finally don with this!


OMG TACK SÅ HJÄRTLIGT MYCKET! synd att jag redan har lämnat in den men jag lärde mig en hel del och min nästa uppsats kommer bli lite bättre, det vet jag om! Tack så mycket, hoppas denna blir bättre än den förra iaf.
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